Dread Sovereign, let my evening song. I. Watts. [Evening.] Appeared in the first edition of his Hymns & Sacred Songs, 1707, Bk. ii., No. 7, in 6 stanzas of 4 lines, and headed, "An Evening Song." The opening stanza, when compared with J. Mason's "Song of Praise for the Evening" (Songs of Praise, 1683, No. xi.), is evidently suggested by Mason's stanza i. The two are:—
Watts, 1109.
"Dread Sovereign, let my evening song
Like holy incense rise:
Assist the offerings of my tongue
To reach the lofty skies."
Mason, 1683.
"Now from the altar of my heart
Let incense flames arise;
Assist me, Lord, to offer up
Mine evening sacrifice."
The hymn in its original form is in common use both in Great Britain and America. There are also altered texts in common use, as (1) "Blest Saviour, let our evening song"; this is in Common Praise , 1879; and (2) "0 Holy Father, let my song," in Baptist Psalms & Hymns, 1858-80, &c.
--John Julian, Dictionary of Hymnology (1907)